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基本分类:
应用文(比如写信),
记叙文(有时间地点人物,注意时态),
说明文(分析列举事情,说明个事情/事物,还可以提出建议),
议论文(提出观点,有观点和支持的论据,有总结)
注意,上述分类是从整体看,这个文章属于哪个分类的。在具体写作的时候,每一句话里,每一个段落里,没必要去刻意区分是说明还是议论。其实观点在所有类型的作文,都可以出现,每句话,也都是反映了一个人的立场和观点,也是表达了一种感情。

001 应用文举例
为了庆祝同学们顺利毕业和感谢老师们的辛勤培育,你班将于下周五晚上在 教室举行毕业晚会(graduation party )。
假如你是班长李华,请你就晚会的活动安排、需要协助的具体事项等给全班同学写一封邀请函。
要求:
(1) 没注意邀请函的写作特点;
(2) 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(3) 邀请函中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
【审题】
(1)人称以第一人称为主;
(2) 时态以一般将来时为主;
(3) 体裁为应用文。
【写作要点】
(1)晚会的时间和地点;
(2)晚会的具体安排;
(3)你的期待。
【提分词汇】exchange sth. with sb. , have a good time, full of, firstly, secondly, thirdly
【提分句型】
(1) During the past three years, our dear teachers have really done a lot for us.
(2) I hope everyone will have a good time.
【参考范文】
Dear classmates,
How time flies! It's time to say goodbye.
The past three years have really been a wonderful journey full of laughter and tears. To celebrate our graduation and thank our teachers, we are planning to have a graduation party at 5 p. m. next Friday in our classroom. We will have a variety of activities about graduation.
Firstly, we can give teachers presents to express our thanks. During the past three years, our dear teachers have really done a lot for us. Secondly, for our friendship, we can exchange blessings and gifts with our classmates. Thirdly, during our party time, we will play some easy games, and invite some of you to sing a song or dance. I hope everyone will have a good time.
I'm looking forward to meeting you all at the party.
Yours,
Li Hua
【典型套话:How time flies! ...... It's time to do sth. ...... I hope everyone will have a good time. ....... I'm looking forward to meeting you.】想想看,是不是可以写在几乎所有的写信应用文里面?

002 说明文举例
每当大型考试来临,同学们都会表现出不同程度的 紧张。请你以"How to Relax When Facing Exams"为 题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对缓解考试焦虑情绪的 建议。
内容要点:
分析:考试焦虑的危害
建议:端正考试态度,制订科学的学习 计划;听听音乐,放松心情;.......,......,(请再自拟两点内容)
注意:
(1)必须包含表格中的所有提示要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数90左右;
(3)提示词汇: nervousness(焦虑),attitude(态度), scientific(科学的)
【审题】
(1)人称以第三人称为主;
(2)时态以一般现在时为主;
(3)体裁为说明文。
【写作要点】
(1)提出问题,即无论什么时候我们谈论重要的考试时,我们都感到莫名焦虑;
(2)分析考试焦虑的危害,提出合 理建议;
(3)进行简单总结。
【提分词汇】whenever, be harmful to, not only... but also..., be bad for, do sports, such as, as well
【提分句型】
(1) ... it's necessary for sb. to do sth.
(2) ... there is no need to do sth.
(3) Follow my advice and you will...
【参考范文】
How to Relax When Facing Exams
Many of us feel nervous somehow whenever we are talking about an important exam.
Nervousness is not only harmful to our health but also bad for our study. So it's necessary for us to learn to relax. I think it's very important to have a right attitude towards exams. Exams are only a way of checking what we have learned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams. Before an exam, making a scientific study plan and listening to some music can help reduce the stress. We can also do sports, such as playing ball games, climbing mountains and taking a walk. Besides, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well. Follow my advice and you will be better at facing exams.
【典型套话见上面的提分句型,比如,there is no need to worry about...可以写在很多作文里】【...a way of checking what we have learned. 学会应用名词性从句,这里是名词性从句里的宾语从句,显得很地道,提分句型。】


003 记叙文举例
生活就像一盒巧克力,你永远不知道会吃到什么口 味,每一天的生活都充满不确定性。这一天可能是 幸运的,也可能是倒霉的;这一天可能是快乐的,也 可能是悲伤的。请你以“My Unlucky Day”为题写一 篇英语短文,说一说你不幸的一天。
要求:
(1)语句连贯,表达准确;
(2)80词左右。
【审题】
(1)人称以第一人称为主;
(2)时态以一般过去时为主;
(3)体裁为记叙文。
【写作要点】
(1)总体概括,介绍要写的内容;
(2)叙述所发生的 事情;说总结,可适当拓展。
【提分词汇】go off, get up, put on, rush out of, arrive at,
【提分句型】
(1) When I arrived at school, the class had already...
(2) ... I realized that...
(3) After school, I couldn't go into my house because...
【参考范文】
My Unlucky Day
Today is one of the unluckiest days of my life.
In the morning my clock didn't go off, so I got up late. I quickly put on my clothes and rushed out of the house without eating breakfast. When I arrived at school, the class had already begun. I was fifteen minutes late. In the English class, I realized that I had left my English textbook at home. After school, I couldn't get into my house because I had left my keys at home.
What an unlucky day!
【介词+宾语,可以用来当作后置的定语,或者当作一个副词来修饰动词的状态,这里 without + doing,表示没有做什么的状态,修饰动词rush,非常地道的英语用法,请同学们学会用上介宾搭配。另外,记叙文一定要注意时态,比如这里的had begun,had left,表示“过去的过去”,要用过去完成时态。】


004 议论文举例
每年6月8日为“世界海洋日(World Oceans Day)”,这一节日呼吁我们保护海洋。据CCTV晚间新闻报道,每年流入大海的微塑料达1300万吨,导致大量鱼类死亡。 科学家预测,如果不采取措施,2050年海洋里的塑料重量将比鱼类还重。作为中学生的你,应该减少塑料制品的使用。请以"Saying No to Plastics”为题,根 据下面五个问题的提示,写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
(1) Can you see plastics (塑料)everywhere?
(2) Do you often use plastics in your daily life?
(3) Is using plastics too much good or bad for our environment?
(4) What can you do to reduce (减少) the use of plastics?
(5) What advice can you possibly give to others when they are using plastics?
参考词汇:
(1) pollute (污染)
(2) recycle (循环;回收)
(3) protect (保护)
(4) cloth bags (布袋)
(5) basket (篮子)
【审题】
(1)人称以第一人称为主;
(2)时态以一般现在时为主;
(3)体裁为议论文。
【写作要点】
(1)介绍塑料污染的现状;
(2)阐述自己的观点;
(3)提出建议。
【提分词汇】everywhere, too much, realize, be supposed to, instead, make full use of
【提分句型】
(1) More importantly, even if we need to use plastic bags, we should recycle and make full use of them.
(2) All in all, we should reduce the use of plastics so that we can hopefully protect the earth and make it greener.
【参考范文】
Saying No to Plastics
As we know, plastics, which have seriously polluted our world, can be seen everywhere.
Actually, I use plastics too much in my daily life. Now I have come to realize that it's a terribly bad habit. We're supposed to reduce the use of plastics and everyone can do this. For example, we should use a cloth bag or a basket instead while shopping. More importantly, even if we need to use plastic bags, we should recycle and make full use of them.
All in all, we should reduce the use of plastics so that we can hopefully protect the earth and make it greener.
Do you think I am right?
【注意这些插入成分,As we know,  Actually, For example,  More importantly,  All in all, ......都是很好的过渡成分,也是可用来凑单词数字,........】
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介绍中国节日
假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友MIKE想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示,给 Mike写一封e-mail, 向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
内容提示:
1、春节是中国最重要的传统节日
2、春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)
参考范文
Dear Mike
How are you? I'm really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.
Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days. Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight. they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish one another a happy year and good luck. How happy we are.
Best wishes
Yours Liu Wei

幸福是什么?
幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是......
请以My happiness为话题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求:条理清晰, 语言流畅,用词准确,字迹工整,80-100词。
参考范文
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: "It doesn' t matter, my child. Remember we'II be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!"
I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.  I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I am so pround of my parents.

初三学生介绍自己的变化
假如你是李华,今年上初三了,        现在的生活和以前大不一 样了。请你根据自身的情况
写一篇文章介 绍一下自己的 变化。词数:60-80单词
参考范文
I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.
I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.
I really miss my old days.

理想职业
最近,你班就你的理想职业展开了一次调查。请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文,向英语校刊投稿。
组员  理想   职业  原因
Mary 时装设计师(fashion designer),  喜欢漂亮衣服,擅长绘画
Kate 园艺工(gardener),  喜爱植物,想让城市更美
Mike 作家,  愿意与别人分享精彩故事
Tom厨师,  为别人煮健康美味的食物
你  ??
注意:
1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否 则不予评分。
Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students' ideal jobs. Here's a report about my group members' ideas.
......
Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
参考范文
Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students' ideal jobs. Here's a report about my group members' ideas.
Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener. She likes plants, and she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He would like to share his wonderful stories with others.
Tom would like to be a cook. He' d like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to keep the people safe.
Hopefully all of us can realize our dreams in the future.

节约用水
水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺,节约用水是我们每个人的责任,请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。
参考范文
As we know, water is very important to man, we can' t live without it. The amount of water which is suitable for drink is less and less. But som e people don' t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.
Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it' s a great shame to cause great waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It' s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don' t save water, the last drop of water will disappear before us.
I believe if every one makes an effort, we can make a big difference.

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典型的套话,几乎可以写在任何作文里,就看你会不会写进去了:
Our parents are worried about 【our health and study等等话题】……
There are different opinions among people as to 【food, English learning等等话题】. Some people suggest that 【we should …….】. My advice is….
It takes (took) us【一段时间】【to do sth】……
【......】makes me feel 【excited等等,表示感受的过去分词变来的形容词】…
It is important for me 【to do sth】【用上形式主语句型】
I / We spend【一段时间】【on sth/doing sth】
【......】makes me【happy等等】…
What attracts me most is 【......】【用上名词性句型做主语,地道】
What interests me most is 【......】
I found it 【interesting】 to do sth 【用上形式宾语句型】
keep +宾语 + 【adj 比如happy,healthy】【用上5大句型里的 Vt +宾语+宾补】
There is a great need 【for English language classes】. 【注意,这里的There 不可以改为It,也是个考点】
There is a special need 【for well-trained teachers】.【there be句型,还可以变成将来时,是提高分数的好句型】
There is no need 【for you to get up early tomorrow】.   
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